[I talk a lot about what is happening in this story, but I do not spoil the story within a story that is featured here.]
This is an odd little duck. It is basically a short story about writing short stories. It follows the perspective of the protagonist, a writer, who is being pushed to tell a story on the spot to her sick father. He wants something simple and to the point, so she tries to do that, but then he complains there is not enough detail. So she tries again, adding a lot more detail in the second attempt.
The problem is that she can only go so far, and the father has trouble seeing things beyond the ending, leading him to see it as more of a tragedy. This frustrates the writer, who has more hope for things in the world.
I found this one interesting because I often think about the existence or lack thereof of objects and events in stories that are not explicitly mentioned. I have dabbled a bit in forth-wall style literature, and I often wonder about the things not mentioned.
Even so, this story is really about a father who not only sees no hope in that which has not been mentioned, and he is also kind of pushing it on his daughter at the same time. He has a strong bias towards tragedy, likely because he sees his own end coming. Who knows?
The daughter is interesting too because she can write a tragic story, but she can see how things can go much better after the ending. She is a good contrast to her old man.
Interesting little experiment. It is kind of a story about itself in a way. I run into that sometimes. I do recommend it. It is a very easy read and gets to the point shockingly fast.
This blog was written on August 31, 2026.
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